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of Extremal Dependence: Internet Traffic Applications
Felix Hernandez-Campos et al.


p1 l28:  (AQ 1)  Asymptotic Independence, Bivariate Distributions, 
File Size, Heavy Tails, Multivariate Extreme Value Theory, 
Network Throughput

p2 l30:  (AQ 2)  Primary 60G70,  Secondary 62P30.

p5 l12:  Only italicizing time looks a little strange.

p14 l14:  Replace Figure 3, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig3_2.ps

p15 l4:  as green dots    --->    as black dots

p15 l7:  shown in blue.    --->    shown as thin lines.

p15 l7:  differing blue curves    --->    differing curves

p15 l14:  the green jitter    --->    the jitter

p15 l14:  of blue smooth    --->    of smooth

p15 l24:  the blue curves    --->    the thin curves

p15 l28:  corresponding blue curve    --->    corresponding thin curve

p15 l30:  and the color blue is    --->    and a very dark color is

p15 l31:  of blue on    --->    of dark shade on

p15 l33:  and the color red is    --->    and a very light color is

p15 l34:  of red on    --->    of light shade on 

p15 l36:  and the intermediate color of purple is    --->
             --->    and an intermediate shade of gray is

p15 l37:  The purple regions    --->    The gray regions

p15 l39:  the gray in    --->    the gray in

p15 l41:  is gray,    --->    is a slightly darker shade of
              gray (seen in the bottom middle of the lower panel),

p16 l1:  Replace Figure 4, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig4_2.ps

p17 l1:  Replace Figure 5, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig5_2.ps

p17 l33:  The green dots    --->    The black dots

p17 l34:  of blue smoothed    --->    of thin smoothed

p18 l14:  the blue curves    --->    the thin curves

p18 l16:  SiZer blue at    --->    SiZer dark at

p18 l17:  and red at     --->    and light at

p19 l1:  Replace Figure 6, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig6_2.ps

p20 l1:  Replace Figure 7, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig7_2.ps

p21 l1:  Replace Figure 8, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig8_2.ps

p21 l38:  large blue and red regions    --->    large dark and light regions

p22 l21:  time. Colors are    --->    time. Shades of gray are

p22 l22:  as red, Duration    --->    as dark gray, Duration

p22 l23:  as blue, and    --->    as black, and

p22 l24:  as green. Finally,    --->    as light gray. Finally,

p22 l30:  Duration (green) shows   --->    Duration (light gray) shows

p22 l31:  Size (red) is   --->   Size (dark gray) is

p22 l32:  Size (blue) lying    --->    Size (black) lying

p22 l35:  Size (red). This    --->    Size (dark gray). This

p22 l39:  Size (blue) this    --->    Size (black) this

p22 l41:  Size (red) this    --->     Size (dark gray) this

p23 l33:  (T vs. S in red, D vs. S in blue, and IT vs. D in green),   --->
     (T vs. S in dark gray, D vs. S in black, and IT vs. D in light green),

p25 l33:  as x   --->   as gray x

p25 l34:  in panel    --->    in gray in panel

p25 l42:  as dots    --->    as black dots

p26 l1:  Replace Figure 10, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig10_3.ps

p26 l25:  using x    --->    using black x

p26 l26:  Transformation (thick dots   --->   Transformation (black dots

p26 l30:  The dots    --->    The black dots

p26 l31:  the x    --->    the gray x

p27 l7:  entirely purple in   --->    entirely gray in

p27 l16:  s_y. in    --->    s_y, in

p27 l33:  vertical magenta line    --->    vertical line

p28 l1:  Replace Figure 11, with the new LargeValAssoc2Fig11_2.ps

p28 l28:  the blue spike    --->    the spike

p28 l28:    more green dots    --->    more dots

p29 l35:  the blue smoothed    --->    the smoothed

p34 l15;  Unpublished ... /LogNorm2LRD/.  --->
Mathematical Statistics and Applications: Festschrift for Constance 
van Eeden, Moore, M., Froda, S. and Léger, C. (eds), IMS Lecture 
Notes-Monograph series, Institute of Mathematical Statistics, 
Hayward, Ca, 333-344.

p34 l17:  Delete reference 10.

p34 l35:  Delete reference 21.

p35 l1:  Delete reference 26.